“Salam
For me,
If
Chapter 1: Parvati’s house.
On the day of my return, I met Parvati at my parent’s house. The first words I said to her were “whats up Parvati, kiasi hai tu” (translation: What’s up, Parvati how are you). That very moment I said to myself completely ignoring her innocent smile-- “Who other then a wannabe says ‘what’s up’ to a person who doesn’t know even “E” in English.”
Parvati is our maid and comes from Ramabai colony, which is 10 blocks from my house, across the Eastern Express highway also called National Highway 4 (NH4). NH4 is one of the two major highways running through the heart of
In just couple of days of my stay in Ghatkopar (suburb of
When this service road was discovered, may be 10 years ago, it was heavily used by locals to get on to the express highway from Garodia Nagar and vice versa, to avoid walking for 4 km around Chembur (the neighboring suburb to Ghatkopar), or paying an extra Rs. 20 (40 cents) by rickshaw. Since this road was a time saver to the local pedestrians, after 2 years, the automobile owners began using it. Now it carried the weight of automobiles, two wheelers, and pedestrian traffic. Like State Troopers, Sheriff Departments and local city police departments in US, in
When I saw the market on this service road I wondered why a vegetable market came up on such a cramped up service road, where there is barely any place for people to walk or cross. I continued to ask such questions to myself, “Why a vegetable market, when the noise and air pollution is so high?”
After observing Parvati for couple of days and other maids in the society, the answer was as clear as crystal – “Customer Service.” Since all the maids stay in Ramabai colony, work in Garodia Nagar, and everybody in Mumbai including house maids have cell phones with free incoming call, it is convenient for the house owner, to just call and instruct them to pick up the “fresh” green vegetables on their way to work…Wow.
As soon as I deciphered this mystery of the vegetable market, I literary jumped up and yelled “
With no doubt in my mind, I can claim that it is ingrained in an Indian DNA to provide better, customer service, through process innovation and technology. In this case it was “cell phone, with free incoming calls.”
Parvati is a maid at my parent’s home since last 10 odd years and also she is the main character of my first chapter of the short stories, based on my experiences to
I distinctly remember it was Parvati’s second year in Mumbai and in Ramabai colony. She had moved from Andra Pradesh, a state in
For those who have not seen a rush hour Mumbai’s local trains this is a brief snap shot of a 2nd class ladies compartment: A 2nd class ladies compartment is 20’x10’ box with other 10 - 20’x10’ boxes on iron wheels, known as Central Railway Train as a whole. During the peak hours over 300 women patrons’ with various colored Saris, board the train from CST [9] along with other 100 teenage girls--the so called “modern” Indian girls, who are in western outfit like jeans and t-shirts. This compartment is so crowded that you can barely see an inch of the floor. The crowded orgy generally lasts for ½ an hour, till Dadar[10] station and the crowd starts to disintegrate, heading toward their respective abodes.
One day, Parvati approached my mom about a loan she needed to buy a house in Ramabai colony for Rs 15,000 approximately $300. “A hut in Ramabai colony!” my mother replied with perplexed look on her face and added “can you buy house in Ramabai colony?” Ramabai Colony was an open land, by the highway where families like Parvati’s family came from distant states, and settled. Residence of Ramabai colony did odd jobs like house cleaning, washing vessels etc. Over a period of time, this settlement increased and multiplied to become, the second largest slum settlement in Mumbai, spread across 10 acres of land. These houses are small huts with walls made of aluminum sheets, which generally are used for roofing purposes. Some houses are made up of bricks, but the families staying in brick houses are the influential families. The house Parvati was planning was just a 300 sq. ft, hut with aluminum sheet walls. After her discussion with my mother, I found out this house cost Rs. 15,000 with one year lease, so when I asked my mother “is it a rented house?” she replied with an Indian nod, meaning “no.” Finally after the long discussion my mom paid her Rs. 10,000 approximately $200, which was equal to her 6 month salary.
To summarize, Parvati who works as a maid, who cleans utensil, sweeps houses, does laundry, cooks and now also buys fresh vegetables, bought a house for her family, which included 3 daughters and a husband who is an unemployed alcoholic. This hut has walls made from aluminum sheets, on land with no landlord, based on a lease of mutual understanding and no legal documents. This payment equivalent to 6 months salary grants Parvati and her family ownership for a 1 year period. Parvati is not the only one with this deal. She is just one of millions families in, one of thousands of Ramabai colonies in
Salam
[1] Shivaji, also known as Chatrapati Shivaji Raje was the founder of Maratha Empire in western
[2] Maharashtrian: Maharashtra is
[3] Ganesh Charturti: Ganesh is one of the most well-known and venerated representations of God. Ganesh Charturi is a festival celebrated in the month of September, in the some states of
[4] Parsi: sometimes spelled Parsee, is a member of the close-knit Zoroastrian community based in the Indian subcontinent. Parsis are descended from Persian Zoroastrians who immigrated to the Indian subcontinent over 1,000 years ago to escape religious persecution after the Islamic conquest (Jhabvalla, 1973).
[5] Gujuratis: Gujarati people, or Gujaratis, is an umbrella term used to describe traditionally Gujarati speaking peoples who can trace their ancestry to the Gujarat region in
[6] Dalit: In the Indian caste system, a Dalit, often called an untouchable. They are also known as outcastes. Included are leather-workers (called chamar), poor farmers and landless laborers, scavengers (called bhangi or chura), street handicrafters, folk artists, clothes washers’ dhobi etc. Traditionally, they were treated as pariahs in South Asian society and isolated in their own communities, to the point that even their shadows were avoided by the upper castes. Discrimination against Dalits still exists in rural areas in the private sphere, in ritual matters such as access to eating places and water sources. It has largely disappeared, however, in urban areas and in the public sphere, in rights of movement and access to schools
[7] Kuccha: Kuccha is
[8] Namdeep: Name of the apartment complex where my parents stay.
[9] CST: Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus better known by its acronym VT is a historic railway station of the Mumbai suburban railway, as well as for some long-distance trains. It serves as the headquarters of the Central Railways in
[10] Dadar: is a place in Mumbai, and has a railway station on the Mumbai Suburban Railway on both the Western Railway line (Dadar) and the Central Railway line (Dadar T.T.). Dadar has the only railway station common to both the Central line and the Western line; this makes it a transit point and the most crowded railway station on the Mumbai Suburban Railway.
2 comments:
Good job! Eventhough few things come to mind that I could point out, I would rather hold off. It's a good piece of writing and I want you to focus more on expressing your thoughts rather than fixating on grammar. The story flows well. I got a soft-corner for Parvati because I can relate to her; I want my own house as well :)
The ending was a bit abrupt. But anyway, keep blogging! Looking forward to reading your future blogs.
Sabir........that was really a good attempt.I must tell u that u ve improved a lot in terms of ur writting skills.
But i am still confused about the motive behind this blog........wheather it was to improve ur skills or just to write down ur experience of stay in Mumbai......
But whatever it may be.......i enjoyed it a lot.......I didn't know about ur strong GK of mumbai.
Anyways waiting for part-2......Do write something on 402-Ripples.....
LAGE RAHO SABIRBHAI.........
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